Time crumbles

into a whirlpool 

swirl of color,


And I am caught

in the undercurrent

of dubious thought,


While all around 

the world is still.



3 thoughts on “Whirlpool

  1. This piece is well written and it fits the picture perfectly! I can completely see it. (-:

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  2. redgladiola says:

    Nice! I like how you ended the first two stanzas on commas so the poem continues, swirling down until that last period. =)

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